Original fiction project – weeks of 12/19, 12/26/2010

27 Dec

Since last Saturday was a holiday and next Saturday is a holiday, this is going to suffice as my writing check-in for this couple of weeks.

Garbage in, garbage out: I’m as bound by culture, class, education, and personal experience as anyone is. And though I try not to forget that, sometimes I have to be smacked upside the head by what should be obvious.

I became aware during NaNo of an emerging theme in my story, something I wanted to write about that had me quite engaged. I was all excited about it until a few days later when I realized it was very much a Western liberal intellectual’s problem, one that a lot of other people probably couldn’t relate to, or wouldn’t find problematic at all. I had a main character inextricably locked up by scientific skepticism entering a world of the apparently supernatural.

That particular quandary is not by itself a bad problem to base a character on, but I had pretty much built up an entire plot/story mythology concept around it (the details of which I won’t go into here), and though the concept made sense for some of the Western World, A.D. 2010, it didn’t make much sense for a fair fraction of the Western World, and, you know, the rest of the globe, to whom it was supposed to apply equally.

Rather than scrap the whole thing, I’ve been working on refining my idea so it makes more sense as a global state of things. I’ve been reading extensively in world folklore, philosophy, science, and the borderlines where cutting-edge science becomes speculation.

I can get quite caught up in that, and forget I’m doing it to write a better story.

But I think it will be a better story in the end because of that.

4 Responses to “Original fiction project – weeks of 12/19, 12/26/2010”

  1. a2zmom December 27, 2010 at 5:24 pm #

    I think that fact that you recognized that speaks well to the future of the story. Most of us have a hard time seeing past our prejuduces.

  2. neshaffer December 27, 2010 at 5:25 pm #

    But it was so mind-numbingly obvious, I would have been smacked in the head by it later, and I am glad it was sooner, while I have time to regroup.

  3. ann1962 December 27, 2010 at 7:03 pm #

    It will be.
    I’m as bound by culture, class, education, and personal experience as anyone is.
    It’s always startling, when you see stuff in stories you didn’t intend, but then there it is.

  4. neshaffer December 27, 2010 at 7:17 pm #

    The best intentions can’t save you, only keeping an eye out. And even that doesn’t always work.

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