May 20th? When did it become May 20th? I sort-of, kind-of finished the first draft of TD 208 on Friday, with a word count of 17,101. I’m waffling because, in going back to start the next draft, I realize I cut a lot of corners, especially towards the beginning of the episode. First drafts are, for me, like outlines are for other writers. It’s where I decide or, really, “discover” what the episode is going to be about. I have to do that with actual text/prose, not just the jotted notes of an outline, because there’s something about writing the *actual episode itself* with the dialogue and blocking and characters acting and interacting that enables me to get clear on what I’m supposed to write about.
Of course, I have a general idea what the plot is going to be before hand, but any given detail I might have in mind can fall apart for a variety of technical or artistic reasons when I start trying to fit all the pieces in place. This one has been a bitch to fit together. I’m trying to create slow building of an emotional crisis up to its climactic point in a convincing way.
The second draft will be longer as I continue to fill in details trying to get it all to work. I want to get this done before I leave for Toronto, but Darth Real Life might conspire against me!
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Yeah, this year has been flying by. Good luck with the drafting.
Note: I’ve posted my Gunn Meta
Yeah, Connor needs a good, solid emotional crisis so we can all figure out what’s up with him. So far he’s just been brooding too much with no clear reason.
Now to pull off the “pay-off” so it actually pays off!
I saw that! I took notes!
You can do it. I have faith in you. 🙂
Good thing I have Faith in me!
Yeah, I saw that pun coming. *groan*
Sorry, couldn’t help it; I’m borderline schitzophrenic.
If you ever needed more obscure sports-related details to flesh out Gunn characterization, you just let me know.
Like for example, how Gunn’s favorite number is #44 because of Eric Davis. (who wore 44 in honor of Hank Aaron – and Gunn would know that)